J. C. Eastling ([info]jc_eastling) wrote,
@ 2006-05-06 03:00:00
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Entry tags:character studies, gen, naruto

[Naruto] Kunoichi Means
Title: Kunoichi Means
Fandom: Naruto
Genre: General; multiple character studies.
Rating: PG for slight sexual references.
Wordcount: 443
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto Masashi.

Tenten is strong in spite of being a girl.

Every morning she binds her hair up. She treats it as an art, her slender hands passing through and around the dark tresses like a calligrapher's brush on paper. She enjoys it. But when she is done, her hair is up on her head and out of her way, and with those slender hands she picks up her weapons and tucks them into place.

She does her best at practice--she may not be as hard-working as Lee or as brilliant as Neji, and she may not have the obsessive drive that either one of them does, but she takes her training seriously all the same. And nobody will ever know that sometimes when Neji spins about, his hands outstretched and his perfect hair whipping about his face, she thinks him very handsome; that sometimes when Lee grins triumphantly after executing a particularly difficult move, she wonders if he would grin like that if she kissed him.
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Hinata is a girl, but she is not strong, or so the opinion always was.

Kiba and Shino know better. They used to pick her up when she fell, but now she gets back up by herself.
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Ino is strong because she is a girl.

In the special kunoichi classes at the Academy, she always paid close attention to the tales of seductive spies and cunning ladies. They reminded her of the stories her father would tell her of princesses who loved and fought and won--and in the end each princess was named Ino. She'd smile and clap when her father revealed this.

At fifteen, Ino has moved beyond the princesses but not forgotten them. She loves the shape of her breasts and hips, adores her beautiful hair. She's delighted when her smile makes men's breath quicken. It's a power at once more devious and more joyful than her jutsu, and she never intends to give it up.
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Temari is strong, but she's barely a girl, or so say the rumor mills whenever she spends time in Leaf.

Shikamaru does not tell them that when he visits her in Sand, she greets him wearing perfume.
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Sakura is strong, and she is a girl.

It has taken her fifteen years of life to reconcile these two statements. They told her she couldn't, shouldn't be both--that either she must deny her feelings and her loves, or succumb to weakness. For a long time, she was foolish enough to believe them and resign herself to being weak.

These days she knows better. Now she cries when her boys are in danger, and then she fights to save them.




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[info]friendpersonpat
2006-05-06 07:37 am UTC (link)
It's Shikamaru's favorite perfume: ropes.

wait what did i say

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[info]annwyd
2006-05-06 07:41 am UTC (link)
You said BONDAGE.

And it's entirely true.

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[info]homelight
2006-05-06 01:03 pm UTC (link)
*HEART*

luuuuuuuuur. How much do I love you in a lesbian way, let me count the ways:

I love you because that hits Tenten exactly-she's capable evn if she's doens't measure up to the two of her teammates (and the LeeTenten FTW)
I love you because you capture why Hinata is strong
I heart you because you get why Ino is the ultimate kunoichi of the group so WELL.
I heart you because of the perfume line with Temari
I heart you because what you said abotu Sakura' sstrength is so TRUE and CANON.

*Memories*
Kunoichi FTW.

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[info]annwyd
2006-05-06 01:17 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. I love the girls of Naruto. ♥

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[info]trendy_rocker
2006-05-06 10:39 pm UTC (link)
Nice job. You captured them all so well.

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[info]annwyd
2006-05-06 11:40 pm UTC (link)
Thank you.

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[info]heronite
2006-05-08 04:50 am UTC (link)
Nice one! I especially liked the one about Sakura, the part where she still cries, but fights to save them. ^^

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[info]bubble
2006-05-08 06:41 pm UTC (link)
Homigosh. Just hopped over here because someone on my F-list recommended this fic to me. :D My favorite parts were Ino, Sakura, and Hinata, especially since the last two are always underrated. Anyway, this deserves a spot in my Disorganized Memories List, 'kay? Lovely work!

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Sorry for offtop...
[info]maranta_aira
2006-06-25 10:44 am UTC (link)
Hi! ^_^ Recently I have read your fanfic " Scattered ", and I want to say that it is really great! Thank you very much for writing it!
Would you mind terribly, if I translate this fic into Russian language and publish it on Offtop website (www.offtop.slashfiction.ru)? I will state everywhere that I am just a translator and you are the author of the fic. Also, all the additional information (like your email or website) can be published, if you wish.
Thank you once again for your wonderful work!

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Re: Sorry for offtop...
[info]annwyd
2006-06-29 12:34 am UTC (link)
You're welcome to. I'm glad you liked it.

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[info]keigojin
2006-09-21 11:07 pm UTC (link)
OMG why haven't read your stuff sooner. Damn your style is so very poetic and eloqunet. It's intense and heartfelt *wanders off to read more of your fics*

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[info]bookem_dano
2006-09-29 08:29 pm UTC (link)
These days she knows better. Now she cries when her boys are in danger, and then she fights to save them.

Best line in a story ever.

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(Anonymous)
2006-12-11 06:03 am UTC (link)
I agree entirely <3

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[info]solosan
2007-08-02 06:57 pm UTC (link)
Sweet.

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[info]mystifyingbliss
2007-09-29 07:42 pm UTC (link)
The Naruto girls are all great, aren't they?

Ino is my favourite, but still. You've really shown what I love most about her: she realises beauty is a skill, not a restriction. She realises that she can get any guy to fall before her feet with a meaningful glance and a glimpse of skin. She also realises that if it doesn't work, she can get him to fall before her feet by kicking him in the balls.

I like the last line too, about the crying and the fighting.

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[info]shiegra
2009-08-04 11:23 pm UTC (link)
I love this so much--how you encapsulate Hinata's quiet, steadfast strength and Ino's pleasure in her own power and Temari, a badass lady in all measures of the term, and Sakura reconciling and Tenten, the quiet strength, and oh--

Lovely. Thank you for writing this!

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